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Talk Nasty!

Do you think I am a nasty girl living in a nasty worlld because I still would like to find out?
Matthaum, I have had my boat rocked before so what in the hell are you talking about??
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dirty talk guide

Talk Nasty!

please read my story and see if it follows the guide line

Imaginative in their construction
Entertaining
Teasing + Suspense
Good description
unpredictable
page turner – interesting

The story
Cher
Doug was driving the car as Caitlin and Cher remained quiet in the back. "It is raining very unclear to see. Many drivers in the cars could get in an accident any second now." Caitlin smiled.
Cher frowned,"Why do you always give us negative ideas?"
She did not answer back. Cher sighed. The car began to pick up the speed. Doug was driving fast, very fast. Nobody but God could tell how it looked outside the car windows. Cher yelled,"DOUG SLOW DOWN! DOUG!" Doug’s head fell hard on the horn of the car. A girl appeared in front of the car. She was barefoot, wearing a purple dress, her hair was dirty yet it was drenched in rain. She didn’t seem to belong there. As if some creator placed her there. Doug suddenly had cuts over him and was dead. Cher ran to the front of the car to turn the wheel so they wouldn’t hit the girl. The car ran out of gas as it was just about to fall of the dead end. Caitlin told Cher to check out Doug as she went to see the girl closely. Caitlin ran up to this girl in the purple dress. She said,"Hello, are you okay?" The girl appeared with the same cuts as Doug. Caitlin yelled,"ARE YOU OKAY! I CAN HELP YOU!" The girl blew up to flames and her skin was flippped inside out. Cher heard the flames, she turned around and saw Caitlin screaming as the girl was turned inside out. Caitlin ran to the car, she fell and everything became blank. Caitlin wokeup and was in jail for pyscho girls. "Cher? Doug? Where are you guys?" She was pulled by two men out of the jail,"Your time is over." Caitlin looked around,"CHER! DOUG!" A nurse went over to Caitlin and greeted,"Hi I’m Regina." "Look, where the hell am I!" "Well, seems you just had your time done at the main jail. Which I happen to work here so I have to go." Regina walked to the inside of the jail. The rain was still pouring and the night was still dark. Caitlin sat down on the sidewalk and looked up at the sky. "I’M ALONE!!!" She put her head down and began crying. A voice appeared from what seemed the rain………..
"Caitlin, Caitlin everyone seemed to die. Now your alone. And you will eventually die. HA HA HA! You are alone. BYE BYE! GET READY TO DIE!"
Caitlin ran away from the rain even though it wasn’t possible. She yelled,"LEAVE ME ALONE!!!!!!!!" Though suddenly she became barefoot and fell. Her face lifted up and blood began to pour on her forehead from the hard sidewalk. "LEAVE ME ALONE! LEAVE ME ALONE!" Caitlin got back up and continued running. Her head banged against somebody’s house. She couldn’t tell because it was too unclear to know where she went. Caitlin didn’t know what she was doing she opened the door. Her friend Belal was smiling at her from the couch. "Hey Caitlin, nice you visited. You could chill here since the rain is hard here."
Caitlin answered,"Belal."
"Ya?" "She’s here in your house, she’s here I can hear her." "Caitlin, are you alright? Cause you got some pretty bad cut from today." She looked down and the same cuts were there. "BELAL SHE’S COME TO KILL US ALL! SHE’S COMING!" "WHOSE COMING! WHO IS SHE!" Caitlin ran out drenched from the rain. "Regina, she was wearing purple too! The same blend of purple!" Caitlin ran to the jail and quickly went inside. "WHERE’S REGINA!! I NEED TO TALK TO REGINA!" She slowly walked out,"Oh, it’s you from before." Caitlin walked to Regina,"Regina, are you her?" She had a confused look on her face,"Whose her?" "That girl." "Look, let’s just talk about this in my office." Caitlin followed Regina to her office. They both sat down in blue chairs and near a white round table. Chains were around her office so you could see the prisoners glare as they talked. Regina spoke,"What girl are you talking about?" Caitlin looked her in the eyes,"She was wearing a purple dress just like yours." "How did she look?"" Caitlin found a picture that looked exactly like the girl she saw on the table. "HER! THIS IS HER!" Regina quickly answered,"That’s my sister! Your a bunch of nonsense! Your as crazy as these slaves in this jail." Caitlin yelled,"So what if I’m crazy! Most of these people are very smart, but you don’t trust them." Regina finally said,"Look, I’ll just send my sister over here right now." She picked up the phone, dialed the number for her cellphone. Regina’s sister picked up and said she’ll be there. Soon Regina’s sister was there. It was Cher smiling at Caitlin. "CHER!" She laughed,"Caitlin, Caitlin everyone seemed to die. Now your alone. And you will eventually die. HA HA HA! You are alone." Caitlin’s eyes widened,"YOU KILLED THEM! YOUR THE ONE THAT"S BEEN HAUNTING ME!" Regina looked at Cher,"CHER! What is wrong with you? You’ve changed." Cher smiled,"I’ve changed much, very smart as always Regina. The cuts I’ve gave have scared eve